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Classmate profile rough draft

Hockey lovers revel in the chill of the ice, the resound of skates slicing across the rink and the rush of unfiltered fights rising out of nowhere.  But for Taylor Lupetti, the thrill doesn't come from being on the ice. She takes satisfaction in the lights, camera and action behind the scenes. "I've been going to Sharks games since I was about three years old and hockey was the first sport I ever fully understood... I knew then that it was something I always wanted to be around," said Lupetti. After being a huge fan her whole life, Lupetti took her love for the San Jose Sharks to an entirely new level. "I turned that passion into a career and my love of hockey combined with that to make me want to become a broadcaster for the Sharks." Last semester, this dream came true when Lupetti became an insider for the San Jose Barracuda, the American Hockey League affiliate of the San Jose Sharks. "I started writing with the Barracuda ...

Evaluate trend feature

Read and evaluate the trend feature linked below and then answer the following questions: 1. Identify the trend that is the focus of the story. The trend is the demand of ice rinks during Olympic years. 2. How well does the writer do in explaining why the trend is happening now? Give example that support your answer. The writer explains why the trend is happening now by explaining why the winter Olympics brings interest to ice skaters, explaining rink closures and how hard it is to find rink time and how the demand decreases after Olympic years. 3. Identify your favorite quote. “Where don’t they skate? I chase ice everywhere,” said Nancy O’Neal, mother of 15- and 12-year-old competitive skaters.  4. Identify any description passages from the writer? Even Kristi Yamaguchi, who grew up in Fremont and won Olympic gold in 1992, is now driving her 12-year-old daughter around the Bay Area for ice time, O’Neal said. 5. Identify any transitional sentences in the sto...

Vocabulary Enrichment #2

Word #1   Titillating In class discussion Tv and movies arouse a titillating response from viewers. Adjective arousing mild sexual excitement or interest; salacious The hairstylist learned titillating details about her clients when they sat in her chair. Word #2 Satisfactorily JMC Internship Policy and Procedures Your employer supervisor must write a formal letter, on letterhead to the school, stating that you have satisfactorily completed 240 hours of internship. Adverb in a way that fulfills expectations or needs; acceptably  She satisfactorily completed the requirements for graduation and was able to walk the stage at the end of the semester. Word #3 Psyche In class discussion Media propaganda and mass culture were held at bay by an invisible shield held by a universally held psyche.  Noun the human soul, mind or spirit Alice decided to take a yoga class to help work on her psyche. Word #4 Stipend JMC Internship Policy and Proc...

Personality profile search

Which profiles did you consider? I considered profiles about a singer, a vet and a professor who loves cars. Why did this profile stand out over the others? This profile stood out over others because this girl participated in many singing competitions and made it onto 'The Voice' which not many people can say they did. Why did the lead draw you into the story? The lead drew me into the story because it talks about a young girl who competed in singing competitions, and it makes you want to learn more about what she is doing now. What's the focus of the story? The focus of the story is about a girl who loves singing, entered singing competitions to help support her family, went to school to study singing and is now on 'The Voice.' What's your favorite quote? “Sometimes, it’s really hard to meet your goals and meet your dreams, but everyday is a struggle. If you’re really passionate and you really love what you do, I think that you can re...

Evaluating the personality profile

1. Did the lead draw your interest to the story? Yes the lead was very interesting and slightly shocking which draws readers in to learn more. 2. What's your favorite quote and why? “We are learning from Ali,” his grandfather chimed in. “Everybody learns from everybody else. Someone else learns from you, and it keeps on going. Even though we are old, we are still at that phase of learning and understanding this generation.” 3. What's the angle of this feature? The angle of this feature is a man who does something shocking and that may be against his culture but the ways that it helps him be who he is. 4. What's the best description in the story?   Mushtaq flexed his biceps and shimmied his hips. A man shoved a few dollar bills at him, and Mushtaq’s sultry visage melted into a sincere, delighted smile. He giggled as he knelt down to chat with the man. 5. How many people are quoted in the story? 5

Personality profile comparison

Which lead does a better job of drawing the reader into the story? I think profile #1 did a better job drawing the reader into the story because the lead for profile #2 was a bit clunky. What is the angle/focus of each story? The angle/focus of profile #1 was how much she liked books and how she was able to use her love of photography as a visual sort of story. The angle/focus of profile #2 was how much he liked classic rock. Which story did you like better and why? I liked the first story better because I thought it was more interesting.

Mystery Character

My brown hair only shows when I want it to. The rest of the time it is disguised in blonde. Fans pack stadiums to hear me perform when I am concealed. My best friends and family are the only ones who know my secret. My friends are sometimes known as Lola and Mike. A strong country twang comes through even in the pop music I enjoy. Overly sparkled and bedazzled outfits cover my body at all times. Flashy necklaces adorn my neck for extra bling. "Funky" would be the perfect way to describe my style. I am also known to be fond of cowboy boots and horses. When I am home I feel more comfortable being myself. On stage, I belt out tunes telling everyone that "nobody's perfect." Some would say I have the "best of both worlds." I am a student by day and rockstar by night.

Limiting leads to the essentials

Lamont T. Cranford, 57, of 62 Main St., a salesman for the Security Life Insurance Company, was stabbed and wounded at 8:43 p.m. last night in the parking lot of the Son-of-the-Sheik restaurant, 378 Watershed Pkwy., by two men, one described as wearing a green beret and the other as dressed in a red suit, when he refused to hand over his wallet, which contained $23.74, and tried to fight off his assailants. Who- Lamont T. Crawford, 57, 62 Main St. What- stabbed and wounded When-  8:43 p.m. last night Where- parking lot of the Son-of-the-Sheik restaurant Why- refused to hand over wallet containing $23.74 and tried to fight A stabbing occured last night after the 57-year-old victim refused to hand over his wallet containing $23.74 and tried to fight off his assailants.  A 57-year-old man was stabbed last night after refusing to hand over his wallet.

Coconut News

Miami Beach Mayor Jim Lange parked his car next to City Hall this morning, bought a copy of the Miami Herald at the newsstand on the corner, read it while having scrambled eggs and coffee at Gyro's Diner down the street and then strolled to his office. As he was walking to his office from Gyro's, a coconut fell from a palm tree striking him on the head and knocking him out on the same day that he had proclaimed "Coconut Day." Who- Miami Beach Mayor Jim Lange What- was hit in the head with a coconut on the same day he proclaimed "Coconut Day" When- this morning Where- walking to his office from Gyro's Why- a coconut fell from a palm tree "Coconut Day" has proven fateful after a coconut fell from a palm tree and struck Mayor Jim Lange in the head, knocking him out on the holiday he had created.  Mayor Jim Lange was knocked out this morning after a coconut fell from a palm tree and struck him in the head after he proclaimed the day ...

Vocabulary Enrichment #1

Myriad - noun  a countless or extremely great number A myriad of stars lit up the night sky. Innocuous -  adjective not harmful or offensive The innocuous question was answered by the teacher. Feign - verb pretend to be affected by She had to feign sickness to thwart his advances. Temerity - noun excessive confidence or boldness; audacity The temerity of his advances turned her off. Affront - noun  an action or remark that causes outrage or offense His protest was an affront to the president. Acquiesce - verb  accept something reluctantly but without protest His agreement to acquiesce with her idea for the group project got rid of many problems. Interim - noun  an   intervening   time;   interval;   meantime She took classes in the interim between semesters. Trepidation - noun a feeling of fear or agitation about something that may happen She waited for the response to her application in tr...

Rewrite sentences for AP style

1. It's not okay to wear tee shirts at practice, Coach Carter said. It's not OK to wear T-shirts at practice, coach Carter said.  2. General Myers met ten times with former vice president Gore. General Myers met 10 times with former Vice President Gore.  3. He drove East from Seattle, Washington to Boise, Idaho. He drove east from Seattle, Washington, to Boise, Idaho.  4. The F.B.I. office has moved to 1,250 3rd Avenue. The FBI office has moved to 1250 Third Ave. 5. In the 90's she received mostly A's in school despite being a rock-and-roll groupie. In the '90s she received mostly A's in school despite being a rock 'n' roll groupie. 6. Aaron C. Reskew Jr. is the candidate that will be elected Mayor. Aaron C. Reskew Jr. is the candidate that will be elected mayor. 7. 17 clerks worked from 7-10 a.m. in the morning, and were paid just five dollars an hour. Seventeen clerks worked from 7-10 a.m. and were paid just $5 an...

Lead Writing Practice

A 2.2 magnitude earthquake shook Santa Clara County this morning at 8:33. Highway 9 in Santa Clara County was closed for nine hours yesterday to clear trees fallen in the road following an overnight storm. Two sticks of dynamite were discovered in the dorm room of a San Jose State University student yesterday afternoon.